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Road Accidents 道路交通事故
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)道路事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损失
2)分析道路事故发生的主要原因
3)如何降低事故发生率
Road Accidents
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。
高分范文
Road Accidents
Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives.
[3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.
[7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.
道路交通事故，作为一个重要的社会问题，一直倍受关注。在大多数大城市，每天有不少交通事故发生。在这些事故中，许多人遭受重大财产损失，他们中的一些人甚至失去了他们的生命。
下列原因导致交通事故。首先，交通变得越来越拥挤，尤其是在大城市。道路越来越多的车辆增加事故发生的几率。此外，许多司机缺乏安全意识，甚至不遵守交通规则。例如，一些司机闯红灯或酒醉后驾车。另外，薄弱的监督管理交通控制部门是一个不可忽视的原因。
考虑到交通问题的严重性，现在是我们采取更有效的措施来解决的时候。首先，政府应该投资更多的钱来改善公共交通，为市民提供更多选择的运输方式。其次，严格的法律和法规应惩罚那些违反交通法规的人。最后，司机应加强安全意识，养成良好的驾驶习惯。只有这样才能成功避免道路交通事故。
【亮点点评】
[1]插入语，as意为“作为”。
[2]表递进。
[3]用于引出原因。
[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“增加了…的机会或可能性”。
[6]“监管不力”，weak的使用准确地道。
[7]“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。
[8]用于引出解决办法，表示解决问题的紧迫性,常译为“早该是…的时候了”。
[9]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.
临摹：一些人失败后可能会变得灰心丧气，甚至会放弃成功的希望。
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2.佳句：More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.
临摹：许多学生认为考取更多的证书可以增加他们找工作的机会。
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3.佳句：It is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.
临摹：因此，我们早该关注一下人口过剩问题了。
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【KEY】
1. Some people, after a failure, may become discouraged and even give up their hope for success.
2. Many students believe that more certificates may increase the chances of their being employed.
3. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.
Bikes and Cars 自行车和汽车
I like going to school by like, because I think I can keep healthy by riding. Bicycles are still popular in Beijing. Some foreigners buy bicycles to ride. But more and more people buy cars because they think they are faster than bicycles. In fact the exhaust gas from cars makes the air dirty and they waste energy.I think bicycles are better than cars.
Bicycles are still popular in Beijing. It's convenient to go to school or go to work by bike. It can help people to keep healthy.But more and more people buy cars because they think they are faster than bicycles. The exhaust gas from cars pollutes the air and they waste energy. I prefer riding bicycles because it is cheap and keeps the air clean.
我喜欢骑自行车上学，因为我可以通过骑车保持健康。北京依然流行自行车，一些外国人也买自行车骑。但是越来越多的人买汽车，因为他们认为汽车比自行车快。事实上，汽车尾气污染了空气，浪费能源。我认为自行车比汽车好。
自行车在北京依然很流行，骑车上学或上班很方便，它能帮助人们保持健康。但是越来越多的人买汽车，因为他们认为汽车比自行车快。汽车的尾气污染了空气，浪费了能源。我喜欢骑车因为它便宜并且不会污染空气。
车祸现场An Eye Witness Account of a Traffic Accident
My name is Liming. I am studying at college. A week ago I saw a traffic accident, which is still vivid in my mind.
It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th, when I went out of the university to visit a friend of mine at another university. I was walking leisurely on the sidewalk when I heard a loud crash of two vehicles just at the T?junction about 10 metres away. Two taxis crashed together. It was a traffic accident.
I went up and found that the two taxis were badly damaged. Both hoofs were out of shape. One door of a car was knocked off and lying on the road. One driver was bleeding and another was shut in the taxi. Some people were trying to help the driver get out of the damaged car. One man was calling the traffic policeman station. A lot of cars were jammed on the road.
From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast. But it is just one of the reasons. In my opinion, the taxi drivers are eager to take more passengers and make a little more money. On the other hand, both drivers don’t show concern for one another. Both of them wanted to run in front of another. Therefore, the accident is inevitable. So far, we should let the drivers keep it in their mind that a little slower, a little safer. Taking care of others’ lives means taking care of your own life.
我的名字是黎明。我就读于大学。一个星期前，我看到一宗交通意外，仍然是历历在目。这是在9:00左右在星期六早上，6月15日，当我走出大学在另一所大学参观我的一个朋友。我悠闲地走在人行道上时，我听到两车一声巨响只是在T？离路口约10米。两辆出租车一起坠毁。这是一宗交通意外。我去了，发现两辆出租车被严重损坏。这两个蹄子都变了形。一辆汽车的一个门被打掉，躺在马路上。一名司机受伤流血，另一人被关在出租车上了。有些人试图帮助驾驶员走出损坏的汽车。一名男子致电交警站。很多车被卡在路上。从道路上停车轨道，很显然，这两个辆出租车开得太快。但它仅仅是原因之一。在我看来，出租车司机都急于采取更多的乘客，让多一点钱。另一方面，这两个驱动程序不关心彼此。他们都希望在另一条战线上运行。因此，事故是不可避免的。到目前为止，我们应该让司机保持在他们的心目中，一个慢一点，安全一点。以他人的生活护理是指把你自己的生命负责。
ACCIDENT REPORT 事故报告
There was a car accident on Shanghai Road at 10:30 a.m.on 25th May. A girl was talking with her friend while riding on the road. Suddenly a car came from behind and hit her. The girl fell onto the ground and could not get up. Her friend shouted for help. Luckily, a policeman arrived in time and took the girl to the nearest hospital. The doctor looked her over carefully. Her head and leg were hurt badly. She must stay in hospital for two weeks. The girl’s parents came and thanked the policeman very much. Some of the girl’s classmates came to visit her and said they would help her with her lessons.
上海路上有车祸10:30第二十五。一个女孩正和她的朋友在路上骑车。突然一辆汽车从后面撞到她。女孩掉到地上，不能起来了。她的朋友喊救命。幸运的是，一名警察及时赶到，把女孩带到了最近的医院。医生仔细地打量了她。她的头部和腿部受到了严重的伤害。她必须待在医院里呆2个星期。女孩的父母来了，非常感谢警察。一些女孩的同学来看望她，说他们将帮助她与她的课。
满分作文:私家车越来越多 Private cars more and more
With the development of economics as well as the improving life standard, more and more people possess private cars
.随着经济的发展和生活水平的提高，越来越多的人拥有私家车。
As each coin has two sides, there are also disadvantages in such a trend. First of all, the air and noise pollution is undoubtedly going from bad to worse. The poisonous gas the private cars send out is not only of great harm to the environment around us, but to our human bodies as well, especially to the respiratory systems. Private cars, of their owners most are new drivers, meanwhile, are consequently easy to result in traffic jams or even accidents. You can imagine how worrying the situation can be when you are in a hurry!
由于每个硬币都有两面，在这样一种趋势中也有缺点。首先，空气和噪音污染，无疑是从坏到更坏。私家车发出的有毒气体不仅对我们周围的环境有很大的危害，而且对我们的人体也一样，特别是对呼吸系统。私家车，车主最新司机，同时，也因此容易导致交通拥堵，甚至发生意外。你可以想象你在匆忙中的情况有多令人担忧！
Such being the case, some iMMediate measures must be taken to prevent it in my opinion. For instance, we should pay more attention to the environmental protection to refresh the air, if possible, to reduce the noise level. It is expected that more advanced technology can make it a reality to replace the poisonous gas with one which both saves energy and causes no harm, thus making our daily life more satisfying!
既然如此，必须采取一些直接措施来阻止它在我看来。例如，我们应该更加注意环保，以刷新空气，如果可能的话，以减少噪音水平。预计更先进的技术可以使它成为现实，以取代有毒气体与一个既节省能源又不造成伤害，从而使我们的日常生活更令人满意！